Feedback on 2nd continuity via social network-facebook &twitter

The second continuity has been up for a a day or two now,I have posted a link to the 2nd continuity on my Facebook page and Twitter, theese social networks will help me to gain some negative and positive feebback regarding the continuity clip from friends.

Having some negative &positive critisim will help me in my future studies as it will highlight what i need to improve on and what iv done well,and its from people who are on the same level as me so its not completley bias.

The feedback can be found here;

http://conscience2010.blogspot.com/2010/05/continuity-2.html#links